Things I have improved, movement:
1.
2.
3.
Refer to below link for structure:
http://graceharrisonportergcsephoto.weebly.com/
1.
2.
3.
Refer to below link for structure:
http://graceharrisonportergcsephoto.weebly.com/
Collage
Verbal feedback, movement
change format of text for Yowa Yowa and Francesca woodman so it can be seen on the main page.
select and present 3 levitation images
add subheading liquify image
movement
AO1: DEVELOP ideas through analysis
AO2: REFINE through experimentations
AO3: RECORD in relevant form
AO4: PRESENT making connections between all the elements
Intro: Definition of Collage AO1/ AO3,
Mind map AO1.
Your introduction is informative and your mind map shows you have explored collage.
AO1/ AO2/AO4 Artist’s research: Abigail Reynolds and collage response
AO3 Give instructions on how to make a Abigail Reynolds’ collage. (bullet points and diagrams)
Your explanation of artists’ method of working is informative, however you need to analyse one image in depth using the template on the fortismere weebly.
Good response, with clear recordings.
AO1/ AO2/AO4 Artist’s research: John Stezaker and personal response (either analogue or using photoshop)
Write instructions on how to make a John Stezaker collage.
Your explanation of artists’ method of working is informative, however you need to analyse one image in depth using the template on the fortismere weebly.
Excellent response. Well done.
AO1/ AO2/ Artist’s research: Gordon Magnin and personal response
Write instructions on how to make a make a Gordon Magnin’ s collage using photoshop. (use bullet point and screen shots)
Your explanation of artists’ method of working is informative, however you need to analyse their work in depth using the template on the fortismere weebly.
Very good response, needs further layers.
Joiners: David Hockney
A01/ A02 Artist’s research, contextual research (cubism), personal response with written / illustrated instructions.
A02 Evaluation of Collage techniques and processes.
Verbal feedback, movement
change format of text for Yowa Yowa and Francesca woodman so it can be seen on the main page.
select and present 3 levitation images
add subheading liquify image
movement
AO1: DEVELOP ideas through analysis
AO2: REFINE through experimentations
AO3: RECORD in relevant form
AO4: PRESENT making connections between all the elements
Intro: Definition of Collage AO1/ AO3,
Mind map AO1.
Your introduction is informative and your mind map shows you have explored collage.
AO1/ AO2/AO4 Artist’s research: Abigail Reynolds and collage response
AO3 Give instructions on how to make a Abigail Reynolds’ collage. (bullet points and diagrams)
Your explanation of artists’ method of working is informative, however you need to analyse one image in depth using the template on the fortismere weebly.
Good response, with clear recordings.
AO1/ AO2/AO4 Artist’s research: John Stezaker and personal response (either analogue or using photoshop)
Write instructions on how to make a John Stezaker collage.
Your explanation of artists’ method of working is informative, however you need to analyse one image in depth using the template on the fortismere weebly.
Excellent response. Well done.
AO1/ AO2/ Artist’s research: Gordon Magnin and personal response
Write instructions on how to make a make a Gordon Magnin’ s collage using photoshop. (use bullet point and screen shots)
Your explanation of artists’ method of working is informative, however you need to analyse their work in depth using the template on the fortismere weebly.
Very good response, needs further layers.
Joiners: David Hockney
A01/ A02 Artist’s research, contextual research (cubism), personal response with written / illustrated instructions.
A02 Evaluation of Collage techniques and processes.
Foundation
AO1: DEVELOP ideas through analysis
AO2: REFINE through experimentations
AO3: RECORD in relevant form
AO4: PRESENT making connections between all the elements
A01 Historical timeline of the beginnings of photography.
A03 Camera obscura: what is it? How was it used originally, how do you build one, record how to make it and make 2/4 drawings from it.
Your timeline is really well developed and presented, with lots of relevant information and excellent diagrams. A01/A02
Your examples of camera obscura work are not present.
To be completed
A03 Darkroom rules: what is the darkroom? what are the main elements? how does it work?
A01/ A02Photograms: how do make a photogram (Original photogram by W.H. Fox Talbot), Man Ray’s examples of photograms with annotation
You have created some really nice photograms, recording of your method of working is clear and shows your understanding of this process..
Darkroom and its working is explanatory and clear.
A03 DSLR technical page with diagrams, images, examples.
A02 A03 Shutter speed, explain what it is and how it functions.
A02 A03 Images of movement, freeze and blur movement, panning to blur background and retain sharpness of moving subject.
A01 A02 HMW jumping shots and Phillipe Halsman artist research.
A02 A03 Aperture, Depth of Field with relevant technical page. Shots of movement and different shutter speeds taken in school.
Depth of Field HMW. A02/A03
Great technical page, well explained.
Really good dynamic shots of people moving. Well annotated you must always record your exposures, as you have done in your excercises. A02/ A03
Great jumping shots, you need to record the exposure for each. Look them up it on your files. (Ctrl+I)A01/ A03
Aperturte and DoF parts are good, are these your own images? It is not clear whose images you are using to illustrate DoF . A03/ A02
Complete this part
Complete this section.
Complete this section.
A01 HORST P HORST exhibition review.
Missing. A01
To be done
A02 A03 Photoshop, do the exercise on weebly and record it step by step by taking screenshots (press: Cntr +Shift+ 4 and click and drag mouse over the screen).
Good Photoshop and explanation.
ere to edit.